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Across the birth and death of day
Clouds scatter wide to colour the sky.
But they can't paint the stars with lights;
The dance of my tail throughout the night.

When the hunt is sparse and swift
And strength can play no part within..
Who else can dodge the scent and sight
And sleep well fed for cunning, not might?

Dance and sing and know the earth
Hollows, dens, and hiding coat,
Dance and spin and know the water
Cleansing, running, cooling throat,
Dance and leap and know the fire
Might, strength, and warning growl,
Dance and run and know the wind
Speed, and scent, and laughing howl.

"Heathen fox" and "unseen guard" am I;
For clever heart and mischief wild,
And gentle touch and watching child.
..but few do know the truth of why.
©2008-2009 ~Shukuchoku
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Author's Comments

This was originally written for a contest over on PonyIsland. I did a bit of digging into some folklore and information regarding foxes before beginning.

Comments and critique are welcome, flames are not.

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Love. Pure love. ^_^ Gawd I want to read more poetry from you, dude. Its so inspiring...it wasn't even cheesy and an obvious 'contest entry' poem like many are. Your research paid off, man...

Awesome, refined. Srsly.

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"Curse the canine-human alliance! Men's brains and dogs' senses made a formidable team." ~ AuRon, son of AuRel, the Gray and Champion of the Clutch.
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wow that's so cool ^^


you srsly should post moar on dA ^^

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----------.:†:blackrose:†:.~Carpe Noctem~.:†:blackrose:†:.
-------.†.Through our Bleeding we are One.†.
---I will bite straight through, as I wait for you
--------------------.†.Endlessly.†.
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Working on it, I really am.

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Acta est fabula.
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^_^;;

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Acta est fabula.
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I had hoped you would. XD

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Acta est fabula.

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